02-28-2020, 08:44 AM
Alexxis_99,
Welcome to the site.
If I were to give you one comment of critique, it is this piece does not have a strong rhythmic componnet, causing it to read more as prose instead of poetry.
best,
dale
Welcome to the site.
If I were to give you one comment of critique, it is this piece does not have a strong rhythmic componnet, causing it to read more as prose instead of poetry.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.