02-27-2020, 11:21 PM
Hi Xyroph,
Thank you so much for taking the time to write your feedback and kind critique. It was very helpful. I'm glad you mentioned about the rhyme because I had been thinking the exact thing when I was writing this. Originally I just wanted to write what was in my heart but ended up changing it to rhyme. I am going to continue to work on this. Thanks again Xyroph.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write your feedback and kind critique. It was very helpful. I'm glad you mentioned about the rhyme because I had been thinking the exact thing when I was writing this. Originally I just wanted to write what was in my heart but ended up changing it to rhyme. I am going to continue to work on this. Thanks again Xyroph.