Contentment

[Joshua Smith]

I loved this poem apart from the last verse where I felt that the language changed and became more simple which didn't seem to fit in the mood of the whole poem which was quite dark and moody. I really liked the 2nd verse it is a really clever use of language.

Thank you for your points, and your comments.  Should you have the time I would be thrilled to hear you expound upon some of the specifics of the last stanza's missteps.  I believe it would be valuable information for me.  Thanks again for letting me know what you liked, and what you did not.