Contentment

Contentment

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01-14-2020, 02:25 AM

I loved this poem apart from the last verse where I felt that the language changed and became more simple which didn't seem to fit in the mood of the whole poem which was quite dark and moody. I really liked the 2nd verse it is a really clever use of language.

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Contentment - by Joshua Smith - 01-12-2020, 04:48 PM

RE: Contetment - by PoetSteve134 - 01-14-2020, 02:25 AM

RE: Contetment - by Joshua Smith - 01-14-2020, 02:49 PM

RE: Contentment - by magnoliaflower23 - 02-06-2020, 02:56 PM

RE: Contentment - by Joshua Smith - 02-14-2020, 03:39 AM

RE: Contentment - by billy - 02-15-2020, 02:12 AM

RE: Contentment - by Joshua Smith - 02-15-2020, 04:37 AM

RE: Contentment - by Erthona - 02-17-2020, 03:16 PM

RE: Contentment - by Joshua Smith - 02-21-2020, 07:06 AM

RE: Contentment - by Erthona - 02-26-2020, 02:23 PM

RE: Contentment - by Joshua Smith - 02-28-2020, 09:08 AM

RE: Contentment - by Erthona - 03-01-2020, 04:26 AM

RE: Contentment - by Brian Roberts - 03-07-2020, 11:39 PM

RE: Contentment - by XandrasWeird - 03-15-2020, 04:03 PM

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