01-12-2020, 09:03 PM
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Hi bb,
enjoyed the read, though, like Billy, I thought S4 a misstep.
Don't know if this will help, but ...
Liberation Study
before the afternoon rains
on the bus
a la universidad
we pass her
out back
a cross
of weathered board
and nails [suspends]
[a] line and laundry
clothespins
braced between fingers
and teeth
[she] struggles
against billowing sheets
the wind shifts
through her
loose strands of pelo
and floral frock
[lifting] the veil
arms raised
gathering bedding
singing
a survivor’s song
praising,
surrendering,
or hanging out wash[ing]
the storm approaches
Best, Knot
.
Hi bb,
enjoyed the read, though, like Billy, I thought S4 a misstep.
Don't know if this will help, but ...
Liberation Study
before the afternoon rains
on the bus
a la universidad
we pass her
out back
a cross
of weathered board
and nails [suspends]
[a] line and laundry
clothespins
braced between fingers
and teeth
[she] struggles
against billowing sheets
the wind shifts
through her
loose strands of pelo
and floral frock
[lifting] the veil
arms raised
gathering bedding
singing
a survivor’s song
praising,
surrendering,
or hanging out wash[ing]
the storm approaches
Best, Knot
.