08-18-2019, 10:03 PM
(08-18-2019, 03:39 AM)Weeded Wrote: I dont like this. Even when imagined as a performance it feels like its begging to be taken serious. I can imagine this performance in a satirical sitcom.Yeah I think it would need a concept to explore the idea through so it’s a bit more nuanced and enticing. Like another performance poem I did for English Extension Two where I explored the concept of chaos and order affecting human growth through the literary ages and personas from them too.
That said, people have disliked great things before.
Maybe youre on to something, personally im not a fan.
mike

