05-31-2019, 09:15 AM
Hi
I felt the loneliness and unhappiness in your poem. The once powerful bond is no more. The child feels the pain and withdraws into an imaginary world.the entire setting of the poem suggests coldness of heart. As far as the content, I am not qualified to say. Only you know the right words. From my perspective you are on the right track.
I felt the loneliness and unhappiness in your poem. The once powerful bond is no more. The child feels the pain and withdraws into an imaginary world.the entire setting of the poem suggests coldness of heart. As far as the content, I am not qualified to say. Only you know the right words. From my perspective you are on the right track.