Fifth Edit: On a Day Like This

[Richard]

Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I was very curious about thoughts on the ending, so I appreciate what you had to say there. I also am happy to hear that near additions help the poem. I think I might be stuck too much on some of the images from the original (i.e. the houses being like foortprints), so I will give them some thought in the next edit.

Thanks again,
Richard