02-14-2019, 08:08 PM
wow, i think that was beautiful. hit me in the feels, the sheer fact i just compared my love to a band aid says a lot.
i sincerely hope i get to read some more of your poetry.
the only thing i could suggest is maybe insead of "mark" in your second verse,
maybe use something a little more graphic like "wound" would give it a deeper sense of hurt
i sincerely hope i get to read some more of your poetry.
the only thing i could suggest is maybe insead of "mark" in your second verse,
maybe use something a little more graphic like "wound" would give it a deeper sense of hurt