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Fifth Edit: On a Day Like This

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02-11-2019, 11:58 AM

Hey all,
Thanks for the feedback. You all give me some wonder ideas to think about before attempting another edit, especially the comments about the ending. I was very curious if the change I made to the ending was effective or not.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Fifth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 04-19-2017, 11:54 AM

RE: On a Day Like This - by Elizazile - 04-19-2017, 01:48 PM

RE: On a Day Like This - by Todd - 04-19-2017, 02:58 PM

RE: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 04-19-2017, 09:51 PM

RE: First Edit: On a Day Like This - by Lizzie - 05-18-2017, 04:20 AM

RE: First Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 05-18-2017, 05:35 AM

RE: Second Edit: On a Day Like This - by just mercedes - 05-18-2017, 09:21 AM

RE: Second Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 05-18-2017, 09:56 AM

RE: Fourth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 02-09-2019, 11:40 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: On a Day Like This - by alonso ramoran - 02-10-2019, 12:23 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Knot - 02-10-2019, 10:42 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: On a Day Like This - by milo - 02-10-2019, 11:22 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 02-11-2019, 11:58 AM

RE: Fourth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Cesar - 02-13-2019, 12:43 AM

RE: Fifth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 02-14-2019, 01:24 PM

RE: Fifth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Knot - 02-14-2019, 08:49 PM

RE: Fifth Edit: On a Day Like This - by Richard - 02-15-2019, 12:29 PM

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