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Glimmer
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01-13-2019, 08:12 AM
I like: I love her, so fuck it. It's stops being a poem, and you can get away with cliches too. In a thing like this. It's all about busting out of the tension of a made thing, a poem. And that's not easy to do. Cliche isn't the right word, 'gimmick' is. You handled it right on the border of gimmick. I think you ended up on the right side.
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RE: Glimmer - by Knot - 12-14-2018, 01:38 AM
RE: Glimmer - by rowens - 12-14-2018, 05:52 AM
RE: Glimmer - by billy - 12-14-2018, 12:15 PM
RE: Glimmer - by rowens - 12-14-2018, 12:41 PM
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