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Annunciation
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12-15-2018, 02:57 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-15-2018, 02:58 AM by RiverNotch.)
My main gripe is that this doesn't say anything yet, although I'm prolly blinded by a really big issue. Considering 'annunciation', 'promise', 'rose', 'hope', etc, this can't help but be read as something Judeo-Christian, which means the last line of each triolet is pointless: the ocean *is* the abyss. And that may very well be what makes this mute.
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Annunciation - by busker - 12-12-2018, 07:35 AM
RE: Annunciation - by rowens - 12-14-2018, 04:47 AM
RE: Annunciation - by busker - 12-14-2018, 08:09 AM
RE: Annunciation - by billy - 12-14-2018, 12:08 PM
RE: Annunciation - by RiverNotch - 12-15-2018, 02:57 AM
RE: Annunciation - by rowens - 12-15-2018, 03:46 AM
RE: Annunciation - by Quixilated - 12-20-2018, 11:03 AM
RE: Annunciation - by Mark A Becker - 12-21-2018, 10:07 AM
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