12-14-2018, 12:08 PM
i agree with rowens, it feels like a start of a poem , at present it reads as a 2 lines short of a triolet without the rhymes. personally i would attempt to add another 5 or 6 stanzas to flesh it out.
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RE: Annunciation - by billy - 12-14-2018, 12:08 PM
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