12-10-2018, 04:16 AM
Hi rowens,
I hope you don't mind my commenting :-)
I'm not clever enough to understand this poem, but I'm interested in your crisis. I don't know whether you've been published, or what your aims are in terms of publishing your work, but I think this crisis might make a good preface. You could even have footnotes, and after that you could launch into your nostalgic musings.
Best wishes,
Ally
I hope you don't mind my commenting :-)
I'm not clever enough to understand this poem, but I'm interested in your crisis. I don't know whether you've been published, or what your aims are in terms of publishing your work, but I think this crisis might make a good preface. You could even have footnotes, and after that you could launch into your nostalgic musings.
Best wishes,
Ally
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.


