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Only the dead can die

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12-01-2018, 06:14 AM

The burning cloak had a nice Yeats like quality to it, the crow was “common bird or metal”.
I thought that the poem had a nice kernel
“As temperatures drop” might not be necessary

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Only the dead can die - by Keith - 11-20-2018, 08:25 PM

RE: Only the dead can die - by alonso ramoran - 11-21-2018, 03:30 AM

RE: Only the dead can die - by billy - 11-22-2018, 10:17 AM

RE: Only the dead can die - by busker - 12-01-2018, 06:14 AM

RE: Only the dead can die - by busker - 12-01-2018, 08:10 PM

RE: Only the dead can die - by Knot - 12-01-2018, 11:08 PM

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