The Fucking Band-Aid
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I thought that this poem was very beautifully written.  The imagrey that you provided to describe such a simple object such as a bandaid made me forget that we were actually still talking about a bandaid.  It took me outside of the meaning I had for the word bandaid and made me think about it in ways I hadn't before.  I also liked the edits that you made to the original. I feel lile those edits just make it a more all around solid porm. Great work
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The Fucking Band-Aid - by Estefanie.V - 01-17-2018, 05:35 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by Scarlet69 - 01-20-2018, 03:45 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by Estefanie.V - 01-23-2018, 06:18 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by Knot - 01-22-2018, 04:36 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by Knot - 01-25-2018, 12:22 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by Estefanie.V - 02-01-2018, 07:11 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-27-2018, 05:18 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-01-2018, 11:58 PM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by TemporaryForever - 02-14-2018, 05:37 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by QDeathstar - 02-24-2018, 01:25 PM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by AndyBryant123 - 03-01-2018, 09:34 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by CrystalScully - 08-29-2018, 02:43 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by Shokna - 09-03-2018, 02:24 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by loboflo - 10-04-2018, 01:18 AM
RE: The Fucking Band-Aid - by JkArcher - 02-14-2019, 08:08 PM



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