10-04-2018, 01:18 AM
I thought that this poem was very beautifully written. The imagrey that you provided to describe such a simple object such as a bandaid made me forget that we were actually still talking about a bandaid. It took me outside of the meaning I had for the word bandaid and made me think about it in ways I hadn't before. I also liked the edits that you made to the original. I feel lile those edits just make it a more all around solid porm. Great work

