Who says that leaves are green

Who says that leaves are green

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09-27-2018, 05:49 AM

I really enjoyed this one. It made me feel like I was in my room after an argument just ruminating. Absolutely beautiful. I would say that it felt a bit odd for the blue/you rhyme at the end since it's the only place that rhymed. I know it was unintentional, but it did mess with the flow a bit for me.

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Who says that leaves are green - by Cassiopeia88 - 04-24-2018, 10:45 PM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by TemporaryForever - 04-25-2018, 04:25 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by Cassiopeia88 - 04-27-2018, 07:13 PM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by dukealien - 05-03-2018, 10:41 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by Cassiopeia88 - 05-05-2018, 05:07 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by Richard - 05-05-2018, 09:42 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by Cassiopeia88 - 05-07-2018, 06:57 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by wordgobbler - 05-08-2018, 05:07 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by TheCoyote - 05-25-2018, 10:43 AM

RE: Who says that leaves are green - by busker - 05-27-2018, 03:51 AM