Second Edit: So Pungent That a Nose Bleed was Inevitable

Second Edit: So Pungent That a Nose Bleed was Inevitable

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08-31-2018, 11:14 PM

Hey nozaki,
Thanks for the feedback. You got me thinking about reordering the stanzas, which could be where I go in the next edit.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: So Pungent That a Nose Bleed was Inevitable - by Richard - 08-29-2018, 12:27 PM

RE: A Botanist's Love Song - by RiverNotch - 08-29-2018, 05:50 PM

RE: A Botanist's Love Song - by Richard - 08-29-2018, 11:19 PM

RE: First Edit: A Gardener's Folly/A Botanist's Love Song - by nozaki - 08-31-2018, 10:48 AM

RE: First Edit: A Gardener's Folly/A Botanist's Love Song - by Richard - 08-31-2018, 11:14 PM

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