Second Edit: So Pungent That a Nose Bleed was Inevitable

[Richard]

Hey RiverNotch,
Thanks for the feedback. I was unsure about the title when I came up with it last night, so I appreciate what you had to say about that. I need to give this some thought.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Hey RiverNotch
Your feedback got me thinking a lot about this piece, so that inspired me into an edit already. Feel free to let me know if it's going in the right direction.

Thanks again,
Richard