First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent

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First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent

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08-07-2018, 12:34 AM

Hey Alex,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm starting to think that I was trying to do too much here. Based of on what you said, maybe my use of the word "thrust" isn't the most effective... want to give this one some thought before attempting an edit.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by Richard - 08-04-2018, 04:32 AM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by just mercedes - 08-04-2018, 07:26 AM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by Richard - 08-04-2018, 07:30 AM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by just mercedes - 08-04-2018, 07:57 AM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by Knot - 08-05-2018, 10:52 PM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by Richard - 08-06-2018, 01:08 AM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by alonso ramoran - 08-06-2018, 03:49 AM

RE: The Solvent Blues - by Richard - 08-07-2018, 12:34 AM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by Richard - 01-29-2019, 10:44 AM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by busker - 01-29-2019, 09:07 PM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by Knot - 01-29-2019, 10:41 PM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by Richard - 01-30-2019, 06:40 AM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by billy - 01-30-2019, 11:56 AM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by Richard - 01-30-2019, 12:25 PM

RE: First Edit: The Solvent Blues/Solvent - by billy - 01-30-2019, 04:50 PM

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