Space vs. Soul

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Space vs. Soul

Oh, the deep question of the universe! 

So dazzling, scary even; its complexities

Endlessly expanding

 

Or just reflecting? <----- this really gives the audience something to think about

 

Does the vastness of the blue horizon;

the penetrating glare of cosmos

Really make me shiver more than

 
Hidden inner landscape, bottomless desires
Monstrous, maddening undercurrents 
Connections, symptoms with no end <---- the decision to use the word symptom is really unique
 
True infinity
 
Perverted question of the human soul

i really like this poem!! i think it is really precise and interesting