05-14-2018, 09:38 AM 
	
	
	
		Pantoum, lines 2 and 4 become lines 1 and 3 of the next stanza, thanks vagabond I am making alterations based on your suggestions, but am torn about the repeitions...  If I change this, do I have to change this?
	
	
	
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