04-24-2018, 10:33 PM
Thank you for the feedback, TemporaryForever! I agree with your points, it's all kind of abstract and it could be better linked. The last line was meant as an antithesis for the first line + all those undercurrents, landscape, etc. were meant to lead to this line. Like how the mechanisms of our subconscious, "soul" or whatever can be in a way even more difficult to truly gasp and understand than sth as huge as space. It could be more specific, maybe I'll rewrite some parts one day.