04-21-2018, 06:28 AM
Hi guys, I'm new here and a beginner at writing. I would appreciate some constructive criticism 
Space vs. Soul
Oh, the deep question of the universe!
Hidden inner landscape, bottomless desires
Monstrous, maddening undercurrents
Connections, symptoms with no end
True infinity
Perverted question of the human soul
Space vs. Soul
Oh, the deep question of the universe!
So dazzling, scary even; its complexities
Endlessly expanding
Or just reflecting?
Does the vastness of the blue horizon;
the penetrating glare of cosmos
Really make me shiver more than
Hidden inner landscape, bottomless desires
Monstrous, maddening undercurrents
Connections, symptoms with no end
True infinity
Perverted question of the human soul