03-30-2018, 07:58 AM
First off, I would just capitalize the first letter of each line. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but it was just distracting for me, and made it all seem too fast.
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rooting and nudging - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 08:44 AM
RE: rooting and nudging - by Mopkins - 12-06-2017, 10:39 AM
RE: rooting and nudging - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 11:23 AM
RE: rooting and nudging - by Mopkins - 12-06-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: rooting and nudging - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 11:59 AM
RE: rooting and nudging - by Mopkins - 12-06-2017, 02:32 PM
RE: rooting and nudging - by SpaceDirt - 03-30-2018, 07:58 AM
RE: rooting and nudging - by Knot - 03-30-2018, 10:16 PM
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