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Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic
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02-28-2018, 04:59 AM
Hey Knot, ta for reading, appreciate the feedback as always, going back to this again I'll definitely be looking at building that relationship between N and she a little further. I've tried to look at line lengths and maybe having done that I might start thinking about stanzas also. At any rate I've lots to work on here we'll have to see what the next revision brings eh?
Cheers Johnny |
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Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-25-2018, 03:10 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by Richard - 02-26-2018, 12:41 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-26-2018, 12:50 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by Richard - 02-26-2018, 03:21 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-27-2018, 12:48 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-28-2018, 01:20 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by Knot - 02-28-2018, 02:57 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-28-2018, 04:59 AM
RE: Samson follows Goliath; A Panoramic - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-28-2018, 10:31 PM
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