02-23-2018, 11:29 AM
(02-23-2018, 10:31 AM)RC James Wrote: I agree - I'm so easily swayed - I did like the original - think I'll go back to it with some of the edits that don't detract from the spirit of the first. Are you available for tele-conferencing? - hehe - You certainly hit me spot-on with this - Best - RCHa, editing based on critiques is fun and interesting. Even when the best move is to go back to the original and restart more gently, IME the poem and my own understanding of it has usually improved.
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