She

[yimbus]

I think it’s relatable, and sets a clear tone very well. I think the first stanza is excellent. The second stanza is somewhat discordant from the rest of the poem. It breaks a good flow, and the words aren’t quite as impactful. The third stanza (w/ the question) is good, and I like the ambiguity it has. The next line is great conceptually, and I like it a lot...although sometimes the wording/structure is a bit trippy. The last two stanzas are a strong finish and conclusion.