01-04-2018, 11:31 AM
vagabond,
"had been" or "had to be"? Good catch, thanks on that, amateurish on my part. All the rest look like good points also. Thanks for the effort. I like the alternative last stanza, maybe I'll incorporate, with the appropriate citation.
dale
"had been" or "had to be"? Good catch, thanks on that, amateurish on my part. All the rest look like good points also. Thanks for the effort. I like the alternative last stanza, maybe I'll incorporate, with the appropriate citation.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.