01-03-2018, 11:13 PM
(12-29-2017, 12:52 AM)tectak Wrote:well, in my opinion, yes.
The last long breath that draws us stumbling
back in to a world now real,
leaves us stripped
of all delusion.
Now blind
at last,
I see.
Tectak(feeling fine)2017
3rd line from end. Is that better vaga?
nihilism not gone but changed in a way that makes sense to me (, who probably uses the word nihilism in a wrong way)
i like the twist "stripped of all delusion/ now blind"
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