12-17-2017, 05:19 PM
(12-17-2017, 12:56 PM)Youi Wrote: We pray to be a journeyed lightI like a change to "journeyed light". It's an interesting phrase, has a nice sound and works well in your poem.
That shines upon our purpose
I'm thinking something like that, but less garbled English.
Or maybe it isn't garbled English.
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