Final Edit: Springblade
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Thank you nibbed and JmLA for your critiques, made some changes accordingly.

Springblade is not a place. It's the name of a metaphorical sword I came up with, the metaphor is explored in the second stanza of Lollygagging.
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Final Edit: Springblade - by alonso ramoran - 12-14-2017, 04:56 AM
RE: Springblade - by nibbed - 12-14-2017, 07:16 AM
RE: Springblade - by JmLA - 12-15-2017, 04:23 PM
RE: Edit 1: Springblade - by alonso ramoran - 12-16-2017, 02:11 AM



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