Conversing with Dust

[nibbed]

hi nibbed, no idea why you call it "stealing". of course you can.
btw, i thought a poem is  in "sea glass, all muted and smooth".

 Thank you vagabond
I will try to write it
neater and better
using your ideas.


nibbed

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I had not read a poem in which a lyrical hero speaks with the dust! I like poems that do not tell, but leave the reader's interpretation. In this sense, "I tell myself" is implied. Greetings!

Thank you for the greetings and for commenting
on my little poem. Your first sentence really made
me smile. Have a great night!


-nibbed

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As this is a poem and not a haiku, a little bit more of a rhythmic quality could be injected to keep the poem from being so stilted. Otherwise it is just a prose sentence.

"Keep going--I tell myself--it'll be one less thing you'll have to do in a minute.

Best,

dale

is it a little better now, dale?

-nibbed