The Cold of Cailleach
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Many thanks, Todd, both for your excellent critique and for reminding me why I keep inflicting this poetry business on myself Smile

I will definitely address the ending as it's always seemed imperfect to me, though the concept needs to remain... ah, challenges!
It could be worse
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The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-26-2017, 04:33 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Achebe - 10-26-2017, 05:03 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-26-2017, 06:31 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Knot - 10-26-2017, 11:53 PM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-27-2017, 04:10 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Todd - 10-27-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-27-2017, 09:31 PM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Richard - 10-28-2017, 12:16 PM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-28-2017, 01:14 PM



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