10-27-2017, 04:10 AM
Hi Knot, thank you for your suggestions. I can see how they would work if this were just an exposé on the habits of gods and goddesses, but it isn't intended that way (any moron can write a poem about mythology, after all). This is a journey poem, and the whole is intended as a metaphor. In fact, I have already told you much of the story involved. The deities are just placeholders for people.
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