The Cold of Cailleach
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Hi Knot, thank you for your suggestions. I can see how they would work if this were just an exposé on the habits of gods and goddesses, but it isn't intended that way (any moron can write a poem about mythology, after all). This is a journey poem, and the whole is intended as a metaphor. In fact, I have already told you much of the story involved. The deities are just placeholders for people.
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The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-26-2017, 04:33 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Achebe - 10-26-2017, 05:03 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-26-2017, 06:31 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Knot - 10-26-2017, 11:53 PM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-27-2017, 04:10 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Todd - 10-27-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-27-2017, 09:31 PM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Richard - 10-28-2017, 12:16 PM
RE: The Cold of Cailleach - by Leanne - 10-28-2017, 01:14 PM



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