Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3)

[Todd]

Thanks, Lizzie. I was leaning toward that one. The other part where you collapsed until I into the first stanza--I get why you did that it and it does make sense. I'm actually considering though having I stand alone in the middle and move up. The speaker for me is the pivot point and I probably should have started there but I have a slight bias against one-word lines. I do realize the trade-off effects the pace. New revision up soon.