Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3)

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Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3)

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10-20-2017, 12:12 AM

Thanks, Lizzie. You gave me some things to think about. I like the hushed suggestion quite a bit and till is a nice choice (though I may have to rethink the middle of the poem if I use it).

Vagabond, thanks for the comments. I think you're pretty spot on with your read.

Best,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-28-2010, 05:24 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by billy - 10-28-2010, 10:44 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Todd - 11-11-2010, 05:17 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by heslopian - 11-12-2010, 12:27 PM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Todd - 11-22-2010, 03:47 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Lizzie - 05-10-2017, 02:29 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Todd - 05-10-2017, 06:42 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Todd - 05-10-2017, 06:58 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Lizzie - 05-15-2017, 04:18 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by Todd - 05-15-2017, 05:17 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder - by vagabond - 05-15-2017, 06:38 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Todd - 05-19-2017, 10:22 PM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by tectak - 05-20-2017, 12:29 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Todd - 05-20-2017, 02:36 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by nibbed - 05-20-2017, 09:17 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Todd - 05-20-2017, 10:33 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by nibbed - 05-20-2017, 12:25 PM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Lizzie - 10-19-2017, 08:41 PM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by vagabond - 10-19-2017, 09:34 PM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 12:12 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 12:50 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Lizzie - 10-20-2017, 01:00 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:44 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3) - by Knot - 10-21-2017, 01:53 AM

RE: Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 02:30 AM

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