Wrath Like Thunder (Revision 3)

[vagabond]

too much interpretation for intensive crit:

the soil "damp with blood".. the murder this god sets out to match or rather end once and for all.
still trying to figure out where the wrath came from and imagine some god being fed up with accusations even when they are not directed at him.
the "hissing" is somewhat distracting in my view since it makes me think of "the" serpent, but maybe it is meant to and i just understand your poem completely wrong)