First Edit: Alone Together

First Edit: Alone Together

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09-18-2017, 05:27 AM

Hey all,
I've completed my revision. I decided to play around with the structure a bit to see if I could clarify my meaning a little. Feel free to let me know if this is an improvement over the original.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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First Edit: Alone Together - by Richard - 09-13-2017, 12:50 PM

RE: Alone Together - by ellajam - 09-13-2017, 06:59 PM

RE: Alone Together - by Richard - 09-13-2017, 09:26 PM

RE: Alone Together - by Todd - 09-14-2017, 03:38 AM

RE: Alone Together - by vagabond - 09-14-2017, 04:35 AM

RE: Alone Together - by Richard - 09-14-2017, 06:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Alone Together - by Richard - 09-18-2017, 05:27 AM

RE: First Edit: Alone Together - by Todd - 09-20-2017, 05:26 AM

RE: First Edit: Alone Together - by Richard - 09-20-2017, 10:53 AM

RE: First Edit: Alone Together - by Richard - 01-05-2020, 02:57 AM

RE: First Edit: Alone Together - by Knot - 01-06-2020, 08:13 PM

RE: First Edit: Alone Together - by Richard - 01-11-2020, 12:13 PM

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