08-29-2017, 12:51 PM
Hey Todd,
I quite like the change at the end. It's funny because I always envisioned the son in this poem being a preteen or teenager. I have no idea why, it's just what I imagined. However, what you added made me visualize a younger child, which changes my interpretation of the poem slightly.
Cheers,
Richard
I quite like the change at the end. It's funny because I always envisioned the son in this poem being a preteen or teenager. I have no idea why, it's just what I imagined. However, what you added made me visualize a younger child, which changes my interpretation of the poem slightly.
Cheers,
Richard
Time is the best editor.