When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2)

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When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2)

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08-29-2017, 06:08 AM (This post was last modified: 08-29-2017, 09:48 AM by Todd.)

New Revision. I took some suggestions and also shifted some breaks around in the middle.

Edit: slight change at the end for clarity.

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When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-25-2017, 11:17 PM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 05:36 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Todd - 08-26-2017, 06:12 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 10:49 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Todd - 08-27-2017, 09:56 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Wjames - 08-27-2017, 12:13 PM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Achebe - 08-27-2017, 12:46 PM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Thunderembargo - 08-28-2017, 11:52 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 05:56 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 06:08 AM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2) - by Richard - 08-29-2017, 12:51 PM

RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 11:03 PM

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