When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision 2)
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@Wjames: Thank you. I agree with your reversal of the seismograph/lie detector line. It reads better that way. Appreciate you giving it a look.

@Achebe: Thank you. I'll give slides a chance. I'd considered it as a possibility. Thanks for the edit suggestions. Much appreciated.

@Thunderembargo: I appreciated the feedback and interesting commentary. Thank you.

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: When My Son Asks About My Worst Experience (Revision) - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 05:56 AM



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