Third Edit: Denial

Third Edit: Denial

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08-26-2017, 11:47 AM

Hey Todd,
Thanks for the feedback. This one has gone through some changes over the different edits, especially the second stanza, so I'm glad to hear it's coming together.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-04-2017, 12:49 PM

RE: Denial - by ellajam - 06-04-2017, 06:28 PM

RE: Denial - by Achebe - 06-04-2017, 08:58 PM

RE: Denial - by RiverNotch - 06-05-2017, 12:55 AM

RE: Denial - by Richard - 06-05-2017, 03:26 AM

RE: Denial - by vagabond - 06-05-2017, 04:56 AM

RE: Denial - by ellajam - 06-05-2017, 08:12 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-05-2017, 01:12 PM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by Achebe - 06-05-2017, 09:10 PM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 11:02 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by elleblack - 06-07-2017, 05:00 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 11:11 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-09-2017, 08:21 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 11:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 08:40 PM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-10-2017, 11:49 AM

RE: Second Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-16-2017, 12:42 PM

RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 05:02 AM

RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Todd - 08-26-2017, 05:56 AM

RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 11:47 AM

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