Third Edit: Denial

Third Edit: Denial

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#18

08-26-2017, 05:02 AM

Hey all,
Decided to take another swing with this poem. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement or not.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-04-2017, 12:49 PM

RE: Denial - by ellajam - 06-04-2017, 06:28 PM

RE: Denial - by Achebe - 06-04-2017, 08:58 PM

RE: Denial - by RiverNotch - 06-05-2017, 12:55 AM

RE: Denial - by Richard - 06-05-2017, 03:26 AM

RE: Denial - by vagabond - 06-05-2017, 04:56 AM

RE: Denial - by ellajam - 06-05-2017, 08:12 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by Achebe - 06-05-2017, 09:10 PM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 11:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Denial - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 08:40 PM

RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 05:02 AM

RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Todd - 08-26-2017, 05:56 AM

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