Talking Dog
#3
You may have written it for fun but what a sad poem. The word-dueling speaks to failed attempt at communication, the poem's solution a desperate attempt at maintaining the status quo, one that I see some people fall into, usually unhappily.

Good read.
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Talking Dog - by dukealien - 08-21-2017, 02:31 AM
RE: Talking Dog - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 08-21-2017, 05:54 AM
RE: Talking Dog - by ellajam - 08-21-2017, 08:58 PM
RE: Talking Dog - by dukealien - 08-21-2017, 09:31 PM



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