08-11-2017, 08:10 PM
(08-11-2017, 12:01 PM)just mercedes Wrote:ah, nope.(08-11-2017, 09:41 AM)ellajam Wrote: "Always", it has that same feeling, less detached. I enjoy this every time, the last strophe brings a distance and immediacy that is heartbreaking without being melodramatic, just life.
Thank you! You're very clever, aren't you?
Responsive writing is fun, hence heartbreak in fun.
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