08-01-2017, 12:39 AM
@ CRNDLSM: Thanks for the read and comments. I'll give some thought to "brains". Thank you
@ Lizzie: Again solid read. I think where we all help one another is that we have different sensibilities and priorities in our writing. You help me in some of my blind spots (some weak verbs/word choice, structure choices). You always give me a lot to think about and I think the comments push me in the right way to improve the work--even if I don't end up changing the specific area, the overall work improves. So thank you.
Todd
@ Lizzie: Again solid read. I think where we all help one another is that we have different sensibilities and priorities in our writing. You help me in some of my blind spots (some weak verbs/word choice, structure choices). You always give me a lot to think about and I think the comments push me in the right way to improve the work--even if I don't end up changing the specific area, the overall work improves. So thank you.
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson