LOVING HANDS
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(02-08-2017, 02:30 AM)hesawacko Wrote:   
another dad poem...

LOVING HANDS
 
Always sticky
Always grabbing
Always clinging
 
Where have they been?
What have they touched?
When were they clean?
              
Now, they’re here
Rubbing my face
Your hands letting me know
We share everything
Like your runny nose
hello hesawacko, I'm with lizzie on this one but i would leave in one "always"...  "Always sticky,grabbing and clinging" I also like the "where, what and when" thing going on in S2 it's kinda cute and reminds me of written reports when i was in school lol
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LOVING HANDS - by hesawacko - 02-08-2017, 02:30 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by JaredEggo - 02-08-2017, 03:57 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by hesawacko - 02-11-2017, 01:47 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Lizzie - 02-11-2017, 11:06 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Richard - 03-29-2017, 04:38 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by justinlion - 04-09-2017, 08:15 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by eharrison - 05-26-2017, 03:39 PM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by AmiL0wHi - 06-17-2017, 03:27 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by CNL - 06-17-2017, 04:37 PM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Voodoogirl - 06-26-2017, 03:39 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Pat Doiron - 07-18-2017, 07:10 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by ADUnser - 12-28-2017, 02:34 PM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by hesawacko - 04-25-2018, 08:36 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Jackintheroom - 06-24-2018, 04:42 AM



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