07-11-2017, 05:04 PM
(07-01-2017, 12:44 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: The WifeOther than that I really enjoyed this short because it reminded me of how the little things such as a reminder from a loved one can calm or soothe someone.
He still had lover's breath
as he jumped the elevator
twenty minutes before the interview The tense changes in this line which makes the next read 'texts' instead of "texts".
when she texted,
Everything will be fine, my darling.
