The Wife
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(07-01-2017, 12:44 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  The Wife
 
He still had lover's breath
as he jumped the elevator
twenty minutes before the interview    The tense changes in this line which makes the next read 'texts' instead of "texts".
when she texted,
 
Everything will be fine, my darling.
Other than that I really enjoyed this short because it reminded me of how the little things such as a reminder from a loved one can calm or soothe someone. 
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The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-01-2017, 12:44 AM
RE: The Wife - by tectak - 07-01-2017, 04:05 AM
RE: The Wife - by Todd - 07-01-2017, 04:35 AM
RE: The Wife - by Keith - 07-01-2017, 08:16 PM
RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 10:53 PM
RE: The Wife - by tectak - 07-05-2017, 11:18 PM
RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 11:24 PM
RE: The Wife - by Bits - 07-11-2017, 05:04 PM
RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 12-06-2023, 06:23 AM
RE: The Wife - by Wjames - 12-07-2023, 11:22 AM



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