The Wife
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(07-05-2017, 11:18 PM)tectak Wrote:  
(07-05-2017, 10:53 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Thanks for reading everyone.
@tectak - I researched it beforehand and I'm still unsure.  Huh

@Todd, Keith - I wanted there to be some ambiguity as to whether the sex was extramarital or not. - An exploration of the connotations of the word "lover" if you will. The last line falls a little flat for this reason. 
I also intended the elevator to be descending from an apartment more than ascending an office building. - That's how I arrived at 20 minutes after some deliberation. Thanks for the observations. I have a few tweaks to consider.
Paul
It's a worry. Pedantically, "text" IS a noun, not a verb...so used  you would have to tense it... So, I WILL text you, I am TEXTING you, I TEXTED you.... harrrrruuummmmmpppphhhhh!
Done. I can't bear the harumphing!
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Messages In This Thread
The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-01-2017, 12:44 AM
RE: The Wife - by tectak - 07-01-2017, 04:05 AM
RE: The Wife - by Todd - 07-01-2017, 04:35 AM
RE: The Wife - by Keith - 07-01-2017, 08:16 PM
RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 10:53 PM
RE: The Wife - by tectak - 07-05-2017, 11:18 PM
RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 11:24 PM
RE: The Wife - by Bits - 07-11-2017, 05:04 PM
RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 12-06-2023, 06:23 AM
RE: The Wife - by Wjames - 12-07-2023, 11:22 AM



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